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Build A Story With Bryan 2013 – Story in Verse Continues

Photo by Voskos

Photo by Voskos

Hello fellow story-builders! Hope the week is treating you well so far, but not too well that you can’t still raise your spirits with a rhyming line or two. As you can see our story’s grown since the last post, but this tale is still in its infancy. Give it a read and then add your own verses, let’s collectively rear this thing into a fine upstanding literary citizen.  Okay? Okay. Thanks for reading, thanks for playing.

Here’s what we have so far:

The old man who smelled of memory loss leaned in

He said “Pull my finger” then grinned.

It felt cold and omniscient as a skeleton key

And once tugged a door did fall open before me. 

The past lay before me, all musty and grim

My hope for some cheer grew depressingly slim.

I first saw my teacher, from elementary school

Who said I was foolish, as well as a fool.

No fool I am, said I, proudly

It is you, I proclaimed loudly

Oh really? he mused with his dogcatcher’s sneer

Wasn’t me who sunk the spelling bee in a puddle of fear.

The old man at my side flicked his tongue, then his finger

And the teacher quickly vanished, not a trace of him lingered.

Replaced by another, a familiar face less unfriendly

A girl whose smile and whose spine were quite plastic and bendy.

Build A Story With Bryan 2013 – Story in Verse

Photo by Green Lane

Photo by Green Lane

Build A Story continues this week and what do you know, our story in verse has grown by four lines. Give us a read and add your own line or two or three or maybe even four. Begin your rhyming legacy today!

As always thanks for reading and thanks for playing. Here’s what we have so far.

The old man who smelled of memory loss leaned in

He said “Pull my finger” then grinned

It felt cold and omniscient as a skeleton key

And once tugged a door did fall open before me. 

The past lay before me, all musty and grim.

My hope for some cheer grew depressingly slim.

I first saw my teacher, from elementary school,

Who said I was foolish, as well as a fool.

Build A Story With Bryan 2013

Illustration by W.W. Denslow

Illustration by W.W. Denslow

It’s time once again for Build A Story With Bryan! Our first round is a story in verse that be rhymin’. I’ve started us out with the first four lines, and you adding on to them is the whole design. Two lines per builder are preferred but one line will do, any participation at all in this madness will be a major coup.

Below’s how we start, in 36 words I’m relaying, and thank you as always for reading and playing.

The old man who smelled of memory loss leaned in

He said “Pull my finger” then grinned

It felt cold and omniscient as a skeleton key

And once tugged a door did fall open before me.